Monday, 14 April 2014

T1 writing

We are learning to: write a description

We can do this when we can: include interesting words, write sentences that make sense,  use describing words  and edit our work.




There's a big funny hole that sticks out. The shape looks like a circle. There's some of the thing that is very dirty. The thing also has webs.

Teacher Comment:You have described the object carefully and in an interesting way. Your next step is to add more detail to you description so your parents can guess what it is. 

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