Friday, 23 June 2017

book review the cat mummy

Your Review How did the story make you feel? Were there funny or scary bits? I felt worried,happy and sad while reading this story.I was sad about mabel when verity was being mean to him.I was worried when he went missing and verity was really sad about it and they found mabel in the mummy that verity wrapped up.I was happy at the end when they got a new kitten replacing mabel. What did the story make you think about? Did you learn anything from the story? The story made me think that verity had learnt that she should of loved Mabel at the start before she went missing and found dead.I have learnt from this story that you should never hate your pet because you will end up regretting it. Would you recommend the book to a friend? Why? If you didn't like the book can you think why? Who would like the book? I think people aged 8 to 11 would like to read this story because it involves some sad bits and a happy ending My Rating for this book Book Review Draw an alternative title page for the book here or upload a photo of a drawing you have done. Title:The cat mummy Author:Jacqueline wilson Genre:contemporary fiction Reviewed by: Karlie Wright The Characters Who are the main characters in the story? What are they like? Verity is kind,helpful and loves her cat because he went missing and she was really sad and regretted being mean to mabel and saying he was so lazy and so boring. Her grandma was a caring,helpful and very kind because when verity didn't like mabel that much she would say don't do something you will regret. Her dad is a very kind,helpful and caring person because when verity was having a bad dream he came in and checked if she was ok. The Story What happens in the story? Verity has a cat called mabel she thinks he is very boring one time she stepped in her sick.the next day she woke up and found that mabel was not in her cat bed.she looked everywhere she was missing.she went to school and learnt about mummies.a couple of weeks later she found mabel dead.she was so sad but she didn't tell anyone she wrapped mabel up in a mummy she put it in her cupboard and didn't tell anyone until the cupboard started to stink and then her grandma came in and said what's that smell she opened the cupboard verity told her grandma about everything.a couple of weeks later she got a new kitten replacing mabel the end :) Your Review Which parts did you like and why? Do you have a favourite part of the book? I liked the part when verity got a new kitten replacing mabel.And another part liked was when she loved mabel in the end Which parts didn't you like and why? Were there parts of the book that you thought could've been changed to make the book better? I liked when verity wished that mabel could come alive again Because before mabel went missing she thought was very boring because all day she just slept and did nothing at all.

Friday, 2 June 2017

About To Hatch

WALT write "a moment in time" piece of writing.
Specific goals (Please highlight yours)
  • I can support my ideas with detail  (Ideas)
  • I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic  (Vocabulary)
  • I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
About to Hatch



I love walking across the open ocean when the waves come back and forth.suddenly a giant egg falls from the sky,it makes a big CRASH!!
It looks like something is dripping out of it something purple.I walk towards it,cracks start appearing.


More are falling from the sky.the egg smells a little bit fishy,I wonder where these eggs are coming from?


Some popping sounds are coming from inside the egg.I move a bit closer to the it,even more are falling out of the sky and making a loud CRASH!!
I move closer to the egg,I slowly place my finger on it...bubbles?it kind of feels like something popping slowly on my finger.


I can slightly taste the purple goo,smelling like blueberries.the sun slowly  starts to set
And the eggs start to fade.. As I wonder about the eggs and  walk away very slowly, the eggs fade away….






My reflection on this writing:
I have worked towards achieving my goals by:making my sentence starters more interesting.





Thursday, 1 June 2017

Dance Term 2 2017

Dance Lessons Term 2 2017
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I've enjoyed learning a really fun and challenging dance.

I've been challenged by when it was the middle of the song because when everyone else was turning I didn't so I quickly turned around.

I have surprised myself when I didn't know that I was a good dancer.   

Thursday, 25 May 2017

The mirror in the attic

I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic  (Vocabulary)
My reflection on this writing:
I have worked towards achieving my goals by:using better ideas for my writing.

I went to find something in the attic like a book or something.When I saw his shiny sparkly thing in the corner of the attic.I went towards it.It was a mirror I placed my
Finger on the mirror.I can feel bubbles popping on my finger.

I move closer to the mirror.I can hear something making noises but they weren't very nice noises they were grumpy noises. I moved a bit closer to the mirror.

All I see is my reflection on the mirror and sparkly things coming out of the mirror.
I get more curious about what's going  to happen will I fall in thee mirror or will
Something else.
I can taste the dust coming from the mirror it was very dusty.I slowly brushed of
The dust of the mirror.

I can see that I'm touching something like water.I jump into the mirror but then it puts me back out..the next day at school I told all my Friends that it was a really weird feeling  and creepy at the same time.



Friday, 17 March 2017

Goal Review Student

Term 1 2017 Goal Review and Next Step
Name:
Parent Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
I want to improve my maths,ask for help when I'm stuck.



1.work slowly working a question out
2.ask a teacher for help when I'm stuck
3.use a piece of paper to work had questions out






Student Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have yo
u made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
I would like to be more consistent at achieving 1500 points on mathletics.







1.ask my friends before I ask  the teacher
2.not giving up when things are hard.
3.getting advice from my friends



book review the cat mummy

Your Review How did the story make you feel? Were there funny or scary bits? I felt worried,happy and sad while reading th...